Dear Arcangelo Corelli

Thank you for finding Dorothy.

Ever in your debt,
-WL

Dear Dorothy

Thanks for showing up. Better late than never.

-WL

Dear Lars (and/or Fenn)

Help me out here.

I'm really not liking the Fenn-viewed-through-Lars'-head aspect of this chapter. It's not interesting unless something happens to the person whose head we are in. Lars, buddy, that would be you.

So what's the point of this chapter?

1) To show how close to the edge Fenn really is (that's why he loses it in the Harbormaster's office).

2) To lay some of the Han rebellion groundwork/backstory.

3) To get the landing party from the Wren on their way up the hill to the Keep.

My question, gentlemen, is this: What the flying fuck does any of this have to do with Lars??

Pulling my freaking hair out,
-Writer Lady

Dear Lars

Get your arse off the Wren and into the Harbormaster's office so we can get this party started. Like, now.

Thx,
-WL