OK, this puts a major twist in my knickers, boys.
But I hear ya. I don't much like it, but I hear ya.
Even so, a major POV change doesn't belong in the middle of my chapter. I'm just not sure how I'm going to justify that.
One chapter, one POV. That's how I like things. Keeps things neat and orderly.
And I was REALLY wanting to keep Fenn's POV 'til last. No, of course, I don't know why!! What a stupid question... I just wanted the reader to see him from everyone else's POV first. Then we'll get into his head.
I don't know why, really. I just want it that way. I guess I'm thinking that's going to put a twist on things - keep the reader guessing about whether he's a good guy or a bad guy.
However.
There are an awful lot of things that are just going to be a major pain in the ASS to show from inside Lars' head. Withdrawal symptoms. Guilt. How and why Fenn changes his mind.
Shit.
Off to untwist the knickers,
-WL
