I'm very worried about the info dump in the second half of the Prologue.
Really.
I'm starting to feel like I'm trying to cram a mountain of information into a molehill. Like I'm trying to tell the whole damn story in the space of 500 words. Which, of course, ain't even gonna happen.
Is it necessary to the tale?
Well, of course, it's "necessary". I'm just not sure it's necessary right exactly there.
Shit. I don't know what to do.
'Fraid of Failing,
-WL
