20 October 2006

Dear Dorothy

Please help. There's all this junk at the end of the plot outline. It's part of the story. That much I know. What I don't know is if it's part of THIS story.

I really want this thing to end, ya know? As in, have an ending. Sure, it can be a cliffhanger ending and the rest of the junk that doesn't fit into this plot can go into the next one.

But I need some clues. Like soon.

Do we break it off with the kids escaping up the fjord? Do we break it off with them walking into the Temple? Do we go all the way to the Bramble Valley? What all do the kids come across? The Nuckalavee? A bailak or three? Iron ore (would they even know that if they saw it?

I suppose we could just leave it as is and if we get to the fjord and we're short on the word count we keep going.

Which is exactly what I just said I didn't want to do.

You bitch. Thanks for nothing.
-WL